Two days before the wedding the princess came to the palace. She was beautiful, probably the most beautiful person the young prince had ever seen. She had caught him in a trance and couldn't imagine marrying anyone but her. The prince rushed into the wedding preparations. He spent the those two days getting everything ready.
The sun had begun to set the night before the wedding and the witch was waiting under the oak tree just as they had agreed. She waited there until there was no more sunlight. Her young prince never showed, so she went to investigate where he had gone. When she got into the palace she saw her prince's arms around the princesses shoulders. This made her furious. She made the princess vanishing in thin air and casted a curse over the prince for his betrayal. She then turn the palace into a huge forest with the oak tree at the center and turn the prince into a black cat . Where he shall remain until he he could see the good from the inside instead of just outside.
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Until one day he made his rounds and once more the old women laid down the bowl of milk. He was so hungry he decided to take the old woman's kindness. After finishing it, he hopped up on the table to meet the woman's gaze. She began to pet him and talk about her life. The cat prince sat there and listened until the end of the day. She offered him a place for the night. He gladly took the offer. When entering the woman's home, which was more of a shake, the women began to talk to him once more. He found a comfortable place on the the ground and admired her.
She said "you're a pretty nice cat. I'll keep you if you'll have me." The cat prince nodded in response. With the nod the cat prince was transformed into an old man. The witches curse had finally been broken, and the two never stopped loving each other till the end of their days.
Author's Notes:
I chose the story the Enchanted Prince. The original story reminded me of beauty and the beast. But I wanted to change it slightly to were the prince had a better lesson to learn. I also wanted to keep it in a classic time period because I felt like the setting fit better. I also added a back story to the witch and the prince as well as the prince breaking his promise to meet the witch.
Bibliography: Filipino Popular Tales: Enchanted Prince by Dean Fansler. Link to source
This is a great story. I think the wow moment of this story is the transformation sequence of the prince and city to the cat and the woods. That sequence had good description. One thing I would suggest to improve the story would be to work on the introduction paragraph. There are a couple of grammatical errors and I would like to see even more backstory about the prince and the witch. How did they fall in love? What made the witch beautiful on the inside since that is the theme of this story? I think this would improve the story a lot and add more overall arching connection to your theme.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I love the layout/design of you page. It is dark and inviting. The images you use really go with the overall theme of your blog and it makes it very cohesive. (side note: in the first paragraph, you wrote his parents pick instead of picked). Also I would go back and make sure you are all in one tense! In the second to last paragraph you have a typo (you typed shake instead of shack).
ReplyDeleteI really loved that story. I was just thinking that it reminded me of beauty and the beast too! It also reminds me of Hocus Pocus to some degree. Anyway, you did a great job creating an image in my head and describing the scene. It is hard to take a story and transform it into something with a limited amount of space to give details and context. You did a really good job though!
Melanie,
ReplyDeleteI wonder how much of a coincidence it is that the original story reminded you of Beauty and the Beast? A lot of these classic fairy tales seem very similar to me. I think it's sad that other peoples fear kept the curse on the Prince.
Thank you so much for sharing, I am looking forward to reading more of your work throughout the rest of this class.
Andrew